To us? they sinn'd, then let them die! [thought And that our little rosy sleeper there Might never taste of death nor human sorrow, Cain. One altar may suffice; I have no offering. Adah. The fruits of the earth, the early, beautiful Blossom and bud, and bloom of flowers and fruits, These are a goodly offering to the Lord, Given with a gentle and a contrite spirit. Cain. I have toil'd, and till'd, and sweaten in the sun And seem well-pleased with pain? For what should I The ages prophesied, upon our seed. Little deems our young blooming sleeper, there, To myriads is within him! better 't were I snatch'd him in his sleep, and dash'd him 'gainst The rocks, than let him live to Adah. Oh, do not say so! Where were then the joys, Oh Cain! look on him; see how full of life, In the clear waters, when they are gentle, and Bless thee, boy! sacrifice which his brother is about to offer. Here are some passages of no common beauty. That which strikes es most is when the parents are hanging over their sleeping boy. HEBER.] Abel. Choose thou! Cain. I have chosen. Abel. And suits thee, as the elder. Thine offerings. 'Tis the highest, Now prepare Cain. Where are thine? Abel. Behold them here The firstlings of the flock, and fat thereof — A shepherd's humble offering. Cain. I have no flocks; I am a tiller of the ground, and must [He gathers fruits. Behold them in their various bloom and ripeness. [They dress their altars, and kindle a flame upon them. Abel. My brother, as the elder, offer first Thy prayer and thanksgiving with sacrifice. Cain. No-I am new to this; lead thou the way, And I will follow. -as I may. Abel (kneeling). Oh God! Who made us, and who breathed the breath of life - Omnipotent, it may be-and, if good, [smokes In sanguinary incense to thy skies; Or if the sweet and blooming fruits of earth, Of the broad sun which ripen'd them, may seem He is such as thou mad'st him; and seeks nothing To have no power themselves, save in thy will; Its mandate; which thus far I have endured. Abel (kneeling). Oh, brother, pray! Jehovah's wroth with thee. [It is evident that Lord Byron had studied his subject very deeply; and, though he has varied a little from, or gone a little beyond, the letter of Scripture, which is very concise, yet he has apparently entered with great exactness into the minds of Cain and Abel in this most interesting scene and were it allowable to ascribe to the author of a dramatic work the principles or feelings of all or any of his characters, except as adopting them for his particular purpose, one would be at a loss to say, whether Lord Byron ought most to be identified with Cain, or with Abel; so appropriately has he maintained the character of each. - GRANT'S" Notes on Cain," p. 401.] 2 [As a whole, this scene is heavy and clumsily managed. It can hardly fail to strike the reader as a defect in poetry, no less than a departure from history, that the event which is the Abel (falls). What hast thou done, my brother? Cain. Brother! Abel. Oh, God! receive thy servant, and Forgive his slayer, for he knew not what He did - Cain, give me—give me thy hand; and tel Poor Zillah Cain (after a moment's stupefaction). My band: 't is all red, and with— What? [A long pause. — Looking slowly round Where am I? alone! Where's Abel? where Cain ? Can it be that I am he? My brother, Awake! why liest thou so on the green earth? 'Tis not the hour of slumber; why so pale? What, hast thou! thou wert full of life this morn! Abel! I pray thee, mock me not! I smote Too fiercely, but not fatally. Ah, why Wouldst thou oppose me? This is mockery; And only done to daunt me: —' -'t was a blowAnd but a blow. Stir-stir-nay, only stir! Why, so- that's well!-thou breath'st! breathe Oh, God! Oh, God! [upon me! Abel (very faintly). What's he who speaks of God? Cain. Thy murderer. Abel. Then may God forgive him! Cain, Comfort poor Zillah: Now. catastrophe of the drama, is no otherwise than incidently we may say accidentally, produced by those which precede Cain, whose whole character is represented in Scripture » envious and malicious, rather than impious;-this Cam, painted by Lord Byron, has no quarrel with his brother whatever, nor, except in a single word, does he intimate jealousy of him. Two acts, and half the third, are passni without our advancing a single step towards the conchas and Abel at length falls by a random blow given in a strug of which the object is not his destruction, but the overth of Jehovah's altar. If we could suppose a reader to sit d to the perusal of the drama in ignorance of its catastrophe, be could scarcely be less surprised by its termination in sart stroke of chance-medley, than if Ábel had been made to d down in an apoplexy, or Cain to die of grief over his body HEBER.] The earth swims round me: what is this? —'t is [Puts his hand to his brow, and then looks at it. And yet there are no dews! 'Tis blood. — my blood My brother's and my own! and shed by me! Then what have I further to do with life, Since I have taken life from my own flesh? But he can not be dead! - Is silence death? No; he will wake: then let me watch by him. Life cannot be so slight, as to be quench'd Thus quickly! he hath spoken to me since What shall I say to him? - My brother! — He will not answer to that name; for brethren Smite not each other. Yet yet speak to me. Oh! for a word more of that gentle voice, That I may bear to hear my own again! Enter ZILLAH. No: What do I see?-'Tis true! - My son !-my son ! Who, [thou Or what hath done this deed? - speak, Cain, since Wert present; was it some more hostile angel, [The three last lines were not in the original MS. In forwarding them to Mr. Murray, to be added to Eve's speech, Lord Byron says-" There's as pretty a piece of imprecation Speak, my son ! Breaks through, as from a thunder-cloud! yon brand, I see it now he hangs his guilty head, Mother, thou dost him wrong Eve. It was. Hear, Jehovah ! Curse him not, mother, for he is thy son- Eve. Eve! let not this, Eve (pointing to Cain). His will!! the will of yon incarnate spirit Of death, whom I have brought upon the earth A grave! the sun his light! and heaven her God! 1 [Exit EvE. for you, when joined to the lines already sent, as you may wish to meet with in the course of your business. But don't forget the addition of these three lines, which are clinchers to Eve's Z Angel. Am I then Cain what hast thou done? The voice of thy slain brother's blood cries out, Even from the ground, unto the Lord!-Now art thou Cursed from the earth, which open'd late her mouth Yield thee her strength; a fugitive shalt thou Adah. This punishment is more than he can bear. Would they could! but who are they Cain. Shall slay me? As yet unpeopled? Angel. Thou hast slain thy brother, And who shall warrant thee against thy son? speech. Let me know what Gifford thinks, for I have a good opinion of the piece, as poetry; it is in my gay metaphysical style, and in the Manfred line."] The" four rivers" which flowed round Eden, and consequently the only waters with which Cain was acquainted upon earth. Adah. Angel of Light! be merciful, nor say That this poor aching breast now nourishes A murderer in my boy, and of his father. Angel. Then he would but be what his father is. Did not the milk of Eve give nutriment To him thou now see'st so besmear'd with blood? The fratricide might well engender parricides.But it shall not be so-the Lord thy God And mine commandeth me to set his seal On Cain, so that he may go forth in safety. Who slayeth Cain, a sevenfold vengeance shall Be taken on his head. Come hither! Angel. It must not be. [The ANGEL sets the mark on CAIN's brow Cain. It burns My brow, but nought to that which is within it. Is there more? let me meet it as I may. Angel. Stern hast thou been and stubborn from the womb, As the ground thou must henceforth till; but he Thou slew'st was gentle as the flocks he tended. Cain. After the fall too soon was I begotten; Go forth fulfil thy days! and be thy deeds Adah. Cain. Ah! little knows he what he weeps for!! And I who have shed blood cannot shed tears! But the four rivers would not cleanse my soul. Think'st thou my boy will bear to look on me? Adah. If I thought that he would not, I wouldCain (interrupting her). No No more of threats: we have had too many of them. Go to our children; I will follow thee. Adah. I will not leave thee lonely with the dead; Let us depart together. 2 Cain. Oh! thou dead And everlasting witness! whose unsinking Blood darkens earth and heaven! what thou now art I know not! but if thou see'st what I am, I think thou wilt forgive him, whom his God [The catastrophe is brought about with great dramaty skill and effect. The murderer is sorrowful and contoux - his parents reprobate and renounce him,- his wife c to him with eager and unhesitating affection; and they wan forth together into the vast solitude of the universe — JEFFREY.] |