If thy unworthiness raised love in me, 151. Love is too young to know what conscience is; No want of conscience hold it that I call Her love for whose dear love I rise and fall. In loving thee thou know'st I am forsworn, For I have sworn deep oaths of thy deep kindness, 18 Amiss again as a substantive. See page 106, note 6. — Cheater here means escheator, an officer of the Exchequer. See vol. vi. page 22, note 12. And, to enlighten thee, gave eyes to blindness, 11:30 153. Cupid laid by his brand, and fell asleep: But found no cure: the bath for my help lies 154. The little love-god lying once asleep Laid by his side his heart-inflaming brand, Whilst many nymphs that vow'd chaste life to keep The fairest votary took up that fire Which many legions of true hearts had warm'd; Was sleeping by a virgin hand disarm'd. Growing a bath and healthful remedy For men diseased; but I, my mistress' thrall, Love's fire heats water, water cools not love.14 14 On these last two Sonnets Malone notes as follows: "They seem to have been early essays of the Poet, who perhaps had not determined which of them he should prefer. He could hardly have intended to send them both into the world." CRITICAL NOTES. Page 93. Look, whom she best endow'd she gave thee more. — -So Malone. The original has "she gave the more." See foot-note 10. P. 93. When I behold the violet past prime, And sable curls all silver'd o'er with white; &c. The original has or instead of all. Malone's correction. Sewell substitutes are. P. 95. And many maiden gardens, yet unset, With virtuous wish would bear you living flowers. nal has your instead of you. Lintot's correction. The origi P. 95. So should the line of life that life repair.—The original has lines instead of line. See foot-note 6. P. 97. Devouring Time, blunt thou the lion's paws, And make the Earth devour her own sweet brood; &c. - This repetition is awkward, to say the least. Walker says, "Perhaps 'Destroying Time.' P. 99. Then look I death my days should expirate. — The original has expiate. Steevens proposed expirate, which is right, surely. See vol. ix. page 296, note on "Make haste; the hour of death is expirate." P. 101. The painful warrior famousèd for fight, The original has Is from the book of honour razèd quite, &c. worth instead of fight. The correction is Theobald's; who proposed, if worth were retained, to substitute forth for quite. P. 101. To show me worthy of thy sweet respect. their instead of thy. The correction is Capell's. P. 102. Save that my soul's imaginary sight Presents thy shadow to my sightless view, &c. The original reads "Presents their shadow." Capell's correction. P. 103. And night doth nightly make grief's strength seem stronger! - The original has length instead of strength. The correction is Capell's. P. 104. But things removed, that hidden in thee lie! — reads "in there lie." Corrected by Gildon. P. 105. Stealing unseen to West with his disgrace. Walker. The original has "with this disgrace." -The original So Capell and P. 106 To him that bears the strong offence's cross. - The original has losse, which also ends the second line before. The correction is Capell's. P. 107. Excusing thy sins more than thy sins are; &c. - The original reads "Excusing their sins more than their sins are." The correction is Capell's. P. 108. Entitled in thy parts do crowned sit, &c. "in their parts." Capell's correction. The original has P. 109 Which time and thoughts so sweetly doth deceive; &c. - The original has dost instead of doth. Malone's correction. P. 109. But yet be blamed, if thou thyself deceivest, &c. nal has this selfe. - The origi P. 110. Will sourly leave her till she have prevail'd?—The original has he instead of she. The correction is Tyrwhitt's. P. III. When in dead night thy fair imperfect shade, &c. - The original has their instead of thy. Capell's correction. P. III. All days are nights to me till thee I see, All nights bright days when dreams do show me thee! - So |